Too cluttered, you need some clear space, to make the overall composition read-houses too close together
make each element solid
the slat fence should have dimension for example, we should see the width of each plank
trees and bushes should have an overall shape each, then be divided into the sub-shapes
that bush should be a down shot like the house it's next too
we should be looking at the top of the bush and the details of the leaves should wrap around the bush as if we are looking down on it, not straight at it
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perspective is good!
nice angle on curved street
some notes:
Too cluttered, you need some clear space, to make the overall composition read-houses too close together
make each element solid
the slat fence should have dimension for example, we should see the width of each plank
trees and bushes should have an overall shape each, then be divided into the sub-shapes
that bush should be a down shot like the house it's next too
we should be looking at the top of the bush and the details of the leaves should wrap around the bush as if we are looking down on it, not straight at it
make sense?
keep at it
arrest anyone who looks remotely suspicious
find evidence later
Great notes, John. Yes that all makes perfect sense.
Back at it.
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