Friday, August 29, 2008

Saltbox house

JK's notes:
I would throw away the rulers though - lines are too straight-that makes things look mechanical and cold - give the house some weight and make it a bit more organic

and you still are filling up negative spaces

your tree in the bg has nice s
econd level leaf clumps, but the tree iis filling up the space between the house and the fg tree

the bush to the right of the house is eating the house silhouette - if you moved it a bity to the right and left space between it and the house, it would make a better overall composition

look at some of the comic examples I post for less mechanical lines and forms

Thursday, August 21, 2008

House and Yard

JK's notes (ouch):
way too flat and wonky

the opposite of what I've been asking for

look at the millions of examples I put up for ya

Wednesday, August 20, 2008

Wednesday, August 13, 2008

took a break from practicing background design today.

Saturday, August 09, 2008

Wednesday, August 06, 2008

my scanner broke... dammit...