Sunday, May 25, 2008

GL's Neighborhood


JohnK said...

perspective is good!

nice angle on curved street

some notes:

Too cluttered, you need some clear space, to make the overall composition read-houses too close together

make each element solid

the slat fence should have dimension for example, we should see the width of each plank

trees and bushes should have an overall shape each, then be divided into the sub-shapes

that bush should be a down shot like the house it's next too

we should be looking at the top of the bush and the details of the leaves should wrap around the bush as if we are looking down on it, not straight at it

make sense?

keep at it

arrest anyone who looks remotely suspicious

find evidence later

Nate said...

Great notes, John. Yes that all makes perfect sense.

Back at it.